Wednesday, August 20, 2014

The Peates

Today, I thought I'd provide a little more background on the inspiration and character description for Lyssa's mutually-hated-family, the Peates.

In 2005, I went to go visit one of my dear friends in the land of Sverige (that's Sweden for you uncultured swine). Along the way, we visited (what I think - Tove, please let me know if I've got the wrong Slott) was Drottningholm Slott (again, Drottningholm Castle), which provided me the inspiration for Lyssa's home of The Manor:


Drottningholm Slott is called the "Versailles of the North" for the beautiful, expansive gardens. Even when we visited in winter (yes, I visited Sweden in the winter), they were still beautiful. I remember walking the gravel paths and imagining Lyssa doing the same; there's something about walking around an old castle that puts the inspiration right in me.

When I picked the nearly-complete book up in February to publish it, I took to the internetz to add in some more Swedish tributes.

This lovely lady is Hedvig Eleonora, the mother and grandmother of two of Sweden's kings. And by mother and grandmother, I mean total boss and Queen of the castle. I saw a lot of key similarities between Hedvig and Mrs. Dr. Sostas Peate, so I finally gave the latter a name - Eleonora Hedvig Serann Peate. (In the first couple of iterations, she had no name, because symbolism.)

The Seranns are descended from a long line of Deep Space Explorers, the first being Jora Serann, who was the ancestor in the book who first settled B-39837 and built the Manor. He was an incredibly pious man, reverent of the giant Black Hole of Doom (aka Leveman's Vortex) perched close enough to see in day and night-time. If Eleonora's demands to attend Temple weren't enough to compel the kids to do so, then the constant threat of the Vortex in the sky did the trick.

As it would turn out, the real Hedvig Eleonora had a granddaughter named Hedvig Sophia of Sweden, which became some of the inspiration for Sera, Lyssa's eldest sister.


Sera always had the name Sera, in all the iterations of Razia that she appeared in. Sera came before the name Serann, the maternal bloodline of B-39837. Since the Seranns were notorious for having tons of children (the image of the youngest to the oldest at the dinner table was partially drawn from dinners at my Grandmother's house), there was always a Serann boy for a Serann girl to marry.

Eleonora, however, chose to marry a young, brooding DSE named Sostas Peate. It was a scandal, of course, especially when rumors started that the man Eleonora loved was most interested in studying the Vortex. Never home, and when he was home, he was always in a foul mood, and then - scandal upon scandal - he decided to pluck the most disobedient child from his growing brood and disappear with her for weeks at a time. And, we all know how that ended... (well, if you read Double Life, you'd have a clue).

Sera, unfortunately, seems to have followed in her mother's footsteps and married a man who is never around. Sera Eleonora Hedvig Peate (von Schweden) is married to a scientist, Frederick, who is rarely at the Manor. Sera lives there with her children, as is the Serann tradition; all the offspring have a place to stay until the lastborn daughter is married, then the firstborn daughter inherits the house.
 
Sera is her mother's right hand, the one who was present with most of the disciplining (see: Lyssa Peate), but is deeply religious and believes that piety is the way to eternal happiness. She spends an inordinate amount of time in Temple, praying, thinking, contemplating.

Dorst is the third eldest Peate sibling, and to my great surprise, has fast become an integral character to the series as I write it. When I first wrote this story arc, he was a throwaway character. As I began to work on Alliances this year, I decided to make him her new supervisor. This has opened the door to a great deal of possibilities. You'll see a change in Dorst starting in Alliances based on the events in Double Life, one which goes COMPLETELY over Lyssa's head.

A big life lesson for me (for all of us) is that people do not spring into reality the moment they enter ours, and they do not cease to exist once they leave. A person is the sum of their experiences, their reactions are not simply because they are "mean" or "hateful." Learning to understand where a person is coming from - empathy, basically - is something that Lyssa begins to learn during her slow emotional growth that is the backbone of the series.

Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Wined, Dined, and Read Blog Tour!

I'm way late on this. But my awesome ABFF Renee invited me on her Wined and Dined Blog tour a few weeks ago and I finally got around to finishing my blog post.

 

Food for Thought:


If your main character were a glass of wine, which one would they be?


Razia would be a dark and tannin-rich Cabernet Franc that punches you in the face from the first sip, then grows on you as you get used to the flavor. Then you just crave that earthy twang in every glass.

Describe your book in one meal


You're sitting in a restaurant and you can smell deliciousness, but there's a 40 minute wait. Once you sit down you realize you've forgotten your credit card and you have to pay in cash, of which you only have $20, so you have to settle for the cheapest appetizer. But oh, you'll be back.

What candy would your book be?


Warheads - five minutes of pain for a moment of sweetness.

What does your book smell like?


Sterile, then fresh air of an undiscovered planet, as well as the dusty desert of D-882.

Your book’s snack would be:


I have no idea! I really don't. Maybe a Cliff Bar because those are the kinds of things she eats when she's planet excavating

About You:

 

Describe your most memorable meal:


It's wasn't a meal, per say. I had a $75 bottle of wine that I got as part of a wine of the month club. I held onto it for a "special" occasion, thinking that sometime in the next six months there would be a diamond involved. Well that didn't happen, so I took the bottle home to drink with my best friend. We never got around to it, so back to Virginia it went. There were two or three guys that I was going to share it with during my dating period, but every time I went to drink it with them, they disappeared.

So finally, one Thursday night I was eating turkey tacos and I said, "Fuck it. This bottle is going tonight.

And let me tell you - best bottle I ever had.

One food word to describe your writing style: 


Crunchy

What will someone find you eating/drinking when you’re really into a good book?


Red wine usually

Sweet or Salty? 


Both


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I'm not going to tag anyone specifically for this blog post because I've got fifteen folks in the wings who are going to be taking over my blog post in the next month or so.

Stay tuned for more on #FallfortheIndieBook2014!

Monday, August 4, 2014

And the title of Razia Book 2 is...

Wait, are you ready for it?

Like, are you sure you wanna know?

It's not coming out until next spring...

Really, you sure?

Well, all right then...

Ta-Da!
And in case you weren't already peeing your pants... here's the (draft) teaser synopsis:

Our favorite snarky bounty hunter/deep space exploration scientist gets roped into helping a female government investigator who is looking into insurance fraud. As the two girls dig deeper, they begin to uncover a conspiracy that reaches to the highest levels of the universal government - reaching back to the most painful episode of Lyssa's past.

And let me tell you - this one's a ride from the first page onward. I can't wait to share it with you.

I should probably finish writing it first. #smalldetails. 

Wednesday, July 23, 2014

Another WIP Blog - This time with VEL!

So I got tagged by the fantastic Carrie Bailey to do another Work In Progress blog. Since I already did one for Miss Priss (that would be Lyssa/Razia), here, I'm going to do the interview about her ickle baby brother, Vel. 

What is the name of your character? Is he/she a fictional or historical character?

His name is Vel Peate, and as I have no younger siblings, he’s completely fictional. His character functions like a sounding board, a fresh pair of eyes, and a safe place for Lyssa/Razia to confide in.

 

When and where is the story set?

I have updated this response since writing the previous post (based on work in Book 2) - it’s in the distant future, when there’s too many humans and they keep needing more planets to buy and exploit.

 

What is the main conflict? What messes up his/her life?

For Vel, his story begins when he makes an agreement with Dr. Pymus, Lyssa’s slimy boss, to become Lyssa’s intern for six months. Pymus wants him to spy on Lyssa to learn everything he can about where she disappears to; but Vel has his own intentions about the internship.


When Lyssa is mistaken for Razia by some Universal Policemen, she gets out of it by pretending Vel is her hostage. The news of the “hostage taking” gets out, and suddenly Razia is one of the most wanted pirates in the universe.

Lyssa/Razia is like


and ditches him to go live in her new, now awesome (ish) life.

But the next week, Vel reappears, and is like, “Yeah, if you don’t allow me to finish out this internship, I will tell everyone.” And, of course Lyssa/Razia is all:

 

What is the personal goal of the character?

Vel has a line that sums up his motivations perfectly:

 

Is there a working title?

Double Life!


Look at the pretty...


Where can we see more?

It's available on almost every single e-reader format and subscription service - except Kindle Unlimited, 'cause they're bastards, but it is available for Kindle Regular (HAH!)

Check it out here:
http://www.susherevans.com/book-info

Taggidy tag tag. Who am I gonna tag next?

Well, since I didn't get asked before I was tagged, I'm gonna just tag some of my #NewAgent Friends:

L.L. McKinney - Because she was teh!hilarious slushreader, and I'd like to know what she's got going on besides doling out sage advice.

S.C. Author - Even though he didn't even pick #RaziaDoubleLife as a MAYBE, he's still a cool dude. And he believes in the future of New Adult, which is always awesome.

E.G. Moore - Such a cheerleader, and so excited about the competition. She got through where Double Life did not; and I'd like to read more about what she's got going on.

Y'all can post anytime in the next couple of days/weeks/years... Just let me know so I can RT you!

Monday, June 16, 2014

Book Release Hot Wash

So, I published a book last week...

Yeah, I know I'm super late blogging about it. One should probably write a blog on the date of such an important event. But, to be honest, I didn't quite know what I was going to want to write until it happened. Then it was a busy weekend marketing and all that, then it was Father's Day (apparently, I made my daddy cry, which is no easy feat #rightinthefeels).

First of all, thank you to the ~50 folks who've bought my book so far. Per the latest stats from le Amazon and le SmashWords, I'm looking at about 24 online purchases (mostly ebooks). The rest of the books I've sold from the copies I ordered directly from CreateSpace. I've still got about 20 or so in my car to sell, which means I might actually make a bit of profit this go'round. (Yeah, it's not a lot. But it's a looooooong game.)

Second, thank you to the folks who have cracked it open so far, and I know at least one of you has finished it already (besides my amazing beta readers who are incredible). Thanks for going on a journey with me and Lyssa; hope you enjoy it :) (And, you know, I'd LOVE it if you'd leave me a review on GoodReads or Amazon or whatever...but no pressure).

Okay, so the thank yous are out of the way. But how was my birthday/release day?

Amazing, incredible. I've been feeling lonely lately, whining to myself and all that. Needless to say, I definitely ate a lot of crow on Thursday. I felt all kinds of loved and appreciated from people near and far.

I got a bunch of facebook well wishes (responded by book!spam, but c'est la vie)

I got the best lunch ever from Wegmans

I got cupcakes from my fun runners

I got unexpected gifts from my best friend in the mail

Lastly, a bunch of people bought my book, which was the best birthday present ever.

In other news, I wanted to share the results of my GoodReads giveaway. I had over 700 people enter to get my book.

SEVEN HUNDRED.

Not only that, but over 300 people have added my book to their "to-read" queue. I know that many of those folks have over 1,000 books in that queue and may never get around to my book, but still. Wow.

700 people know I exist!!

I'm waiting to get approval for yet another giveaway - this time 3 books/2 week time period. The giveaway itself is actually kind of expensive (the $10 cost me ~$100 to produce and ship to contest winners), but I can't argue with that kind of exposure. So far, it's the best investment I've made.

I've also got a Facebook Ad running, which, last time resulted in a 100% increase in fans. Since Thursday at midnight, total fans have grown by 13%, but the total number of books sold has been pretty stagnant since Thursday. Once new fans = new sales, then I'll celebrate.

I'm planning on doing some more giveaways and free book days over the next few weeks. But you know, I'd *love* it you'd actually pony up the $4 instead of waiting for the free giveaway ;)

Which you can purchase here: http://www.susherevans.com/book-info

Monday, June 2, 2014

Support

I come from an abnormally large family that I am actually ridiculously close with. My mom's side of the family numbers around 35 folks between first and second cousins and children of my cousins that are more like my siblings and nieces and nephews. My dad had 8 brothers and sisters, and although the 30 members of that family aren't as close as my mom's side, Facebook and social media have brought us closer together - even though some live as far away as Alaska. So total, outside of my mom, dad, bro, soon-to-be-sis-in-law, and me, I'm looking at 65 family members.

Besides blood relatives, I have this entire other family that I grew up with (happens to include my bestie) where her mom is like my second mom and her dad is like my second dad and her brother is like my second brother and she and her sister are like the sisters I never had (It's so bad that I actually kind of feel a bit like her in-laws are my in-laws sometimes). There's a bunch of other families that I grew up with that still live in my teeny-tiny town. The kind of place when you go out to dinner, you always see someone you know. That plus a beach...it's paradise.

So basically, Pensacola is one big ol' homecoming party for me every time I step off the plane. They sit around a table and tell me how pretty I am and love on my hair (which looks AMAZING in the Florida humidity and soft water) and feed me food and it's just fantastic. Coming from DC, where it's every man for himself, it's nice to step into such a warm happy place where people actually give a crap about whether you succeed or fail. It's nice to have a huge group of people who I know I can count on to be there for me - which is part of the reason why I'm so eager to move back home. I feel like an island here in DC, and it's so much more striking when I go home how very alone I am up here. (100% by my own doing, I will freely admit).

Obviously, I was/am home this weekend, and I found myself surrounded by this warm glow of love and support from my friends and family. I brought 13 copies of the book with me to sell and...I've sold 8 so far I sold them all to my friends and family. Like, we've exchanged cash-for-book. Or, in Cathi's case, quarters-for-books. <333

My big ol' southern family (and my northern family too) have been so super excited about the book and it blows my mind how supportive they are. Even the pseudo in-laws are just so...amazingly involved and proud of me. It warms my heart and makes me feel like...I don't know. There's good karma coming my way. I've put so much out into the universe, I feel like maybe it's finally boomeranging back to me. (Though even saying that feels disingenuous, like acknowledging the volunteering and the time spent mentoring and helping others invalidates the work done. But I digress.)

I think that's why I feel so weird asking these beautifully supportive people for money - well, okay, Suni feels weird asking them for money. Whit's like, "hand that shit over, we got a business to run." And thank God for Whit, or else we'd have 1,000 books in our living room right now and would give them all away for free, leaving us with $3k in debt. Again, I digress.

I'm sitting here, looking at the amount of money I've gotten for these books and I'm just blown away.

Okay, it's like $130.

Still, I'm making money doing something I love. I'm making money for my words on a paper!

And now the terrifying part begins - they've all begun to read it. My ickle baby cousin - the same one in the aforementioned post about discovering a new series - has been obsessively following my blog (her words not mine - Hi Alex!) and she's apparently gone through a huge part of it. She says she can't put it down... so that's hopeful at least?

I think I'm most nervous about people buying this book and absolutely hating it. Hating the concept, hating the voice, hating the topic. Because I've read some books recently that I was not a fan of - some which I couldn't get past the first page. I hate - HATE - when I come across those books, because I know the author worked hard on it, and I don't want to pooh pooh someone else's work. But I also believe strongly in honesty and looking at items impartially. I state any hang-ups I have up front, so people can decide whether my review will be helpful to them or not.

I'm terrified that's why all of those reviewers that I sent the book to haven't posted their reviews yet - they think it's terrible and aren't sure how to tell me. Intellectually, I recognize that not everyone can finish a book in 6 hours like I seem to be able to do. I recognize that people have lives and busy schedules and all that. They just haven't gotten around to reading my book because they're busy, and not because they got two pages in and decided it was horrible garbage and they regretted telling me they'd review it.

Right?

On a related note...10 days :D 

Friday, April 4, 2014

What's In a Name?

Tonight, the blog is all about aliases and celebrity baby names

Odd choice of topic, I know. But stay with me here.

So in my book, Razia is a bounty hunter, who hunts and captures pirates. Pirates, like in traditional media, are stealing and pillaging, as they do. And Razia's job is to find these pirates, and bring them to the bounty office, where she will get their reward. 

What makes her job a little easier is the fact that there is a universal banking system that everyone uses. Which means that somewhere there is a database of every transaction anyone ever makes (there's no cash, only credits). Because she belongs to a "union" of sorts, she has access to this great big database, and thus can find any pirate she wants based on where and how they spend their money.

But wait!

Pirates realized that they no longer had anonymity with regards to their purchases, so they began to create multiple aliases, trying to stay hidden from bounty hunters. As they get captured, their aliases get reported and put into their bounty profile, like the below:



Now, you'll see for our friend Relleck, who at this point is the most wanted person in the universe, he's got a list of things he's wanted for, a reward, known aliases and accomplices, pirate web affiliation (that's the "union" thing I was talking about). 

Which brings me to Celebrity Baby Names.

I really hate creating names. I think they all sound stupid when I make them up. Really stupid. So in lieu of having to create a crazy name, I went to the craziest people I know - celebrities - and stole their baby names. 

So you'll see, whenever there's a pirate with funny alias names, just know that somewhere out there, a real person has been blessed by their crazy parents with that same name.

Feel sorry for that person.

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Side note: What do you think of the silhouette-looking icon? I obviously cannot draw, and I cannot/do not want to afford buying stock photos. But I wanted to have a Facebook-like feel to the pirate intrawebs.

Looking for your feedback...

Friday, March 28, 2014

Patience

"Patient anticipation
All my life I've been hurry up and wait..."
- "Independence," The Band Perry

In case you missed it, I finished writing my book. 

It was actually kind of weird. It wasn't sitting at a typewriter, putting down the last few words, smiling satisfactorily, and sipping my coffee. I was filling in the blanks with some placeholders in the final three chapters, and I went to hunt for another placeholder. I realized there were none left and said, "Oh. So I'm done then? Okay." 

Immediately, the first thing I wanted to do was publish it, right then and there, and it took every ounce of my other, saner half (aka Whit) to not publish it then and there. Because it's written, not finished, and there's a big difference. There are still edits to be made - making sure there are no grammatical errors (hello prologue), adding in details about pirate bounty info. Also making sure that I've taken the time to properly describe worlds, scenes, environments - something I don't take the time to do in the throws of writing amazing dialogue. The worlds are clear to me, I hate having to stop and describe them. But you don't live in my head, so I have to. C'est la vie. 

I also have nearly sent the book about five times to the select few individuals who I am entrusting to read and give me feedback. But I have not, because Whit is right - I don't want to send out a half-assed product because I'm too excited. Because what usually happens in that case is something has tickled me pink, I share it with people, and they respond with a critique of all the things wrong with it (Grammar, etc). And then I get all pissy because they aren't sharing in my enjoyment. This happens at work all the time. 

So I am holding back the flood of emotions while I edit the book and make sure that it is exactly what I want to say, devoid of stupid errors and mistakes. I'm hoping I can knock it out this weekend, because my excitement is just getting the best of me. 

One of the biggest reasons why I'm getting so excited is because I've begun to imagine a life where writing is all that I do. Books make money, right, and I got a bunch of them, so why shouldn't I get to spend my life doing the things that I love? It's part of this whole, discovering who I am and what I want, thing. I put the writing on a shelf because I never thought it would make any kind of money, but now I'm starting to wonder if I was wrong. 

Don't worry, Mom and Dad, no rash decisions yet - after all, I haven't even sold one book. 

But I am doing research on how much to price the book for, how much profit per book, how many books I would need to sell in order to pay my mortgage and keep my kind of standard of living. It's kind of crazy to think how much I've grown as a person in the past few months to even consider something so...terrifying. Give up a steady, paying job for a life where all of my income comes from my brain and little fingers. 

(Whit just piped up and told me that if I quit my job, I have to make sure I have disability insurance, in case my brain and/or fingers failed. Thus is the conversation that goes on in my head. )

But first, to finish the book. Onward!

Sunday, March 16, 2014

What you've all been waiting for - Sneak Peek #1 of my book!

Because you have all suffered through my recent bout of introspective posts - and because I'm feeling generous and brave today - and because I got some 20+ new likes on my Facebook page (not quite to 100 yet, but hopefully soon!) 

Here's the prologue of my book*:  



*Don't hold me to this exact text just quite yet - I'm always tweaking stuff. 

Wednesday, February 19, 2014

20 Questions

Tonight, I thought I would post a few things about the book - and by a few, I mean 20 questions. And by 20 questions, I mean 10.

1. Summarize the Razia series in one sentence
It's about a girl, trying to follow her dreams, and dealing with all the other crap that life throws her way....in space...with pirates...and stuff. 

2. Summarize the first book in less words than the synopsis
Razia wants to be a bounty hunter, she ain't got no respect/can only capture peons, has to work as a scientist to pay the bills, which means she has to deal with a slimy boss. Said boss saddles her with intern as a means to spy on her. Said intern is later mistaken for a hostage, which results in a tiny bit of respect for Razia from the pirates. Intern + Razia get into shenanigans, trying to avoid boss, who is obsessed with her (disappeared) father while trying to be the best bounty hunter in the universe

3. How many books are in this series?
Definitely 4. Maybe 5, if I get really brave. And maybe 6 - the prologue. There's a big long story before Book 1 that should get told at some point. And you know, if this gets super successful, maybe some vignettes between books 4 and 5. But let's not get too crazy now.

4. What is your favorite part of the book?
Ah-hah. no spoilers. But generally, anytime Razia/Lyssa gets sassy always tickles my funny bone. Or whenever I make her life miserable and she bitches about it.

5. Explain the whole Razia/Lyssa thing
In the book, whenever she is in the pirate "world," she refers to herself and sees herself as Razia. Whenever she's back in the DSE world, she refers to herself and sees herself as Lyssa. When she's in neither...you'll have to read to find out.

6. What is a Deep Space Explorer (DSE)?
A DSE is a scientist that travels to far flung planets to "excavate" them - or analyze their chemical and biological signatures to see if life could be sustained there. Then, they take all this data and sell them to planet prospectors, representatives for planet buyers. The buyers could be corporations, governments, military, universities - anyone who wants a giant planet to do stuff on. It's a big business, and very heavily regulated.

Prospective scientists as young as 11 are sent to the Planetary and System Science Academy, where they learn key skills such as planetary survival, carbon signature mapping, and other dorky kinds of stuff. Once they graduate with their doctorate (around 18 or 19), the stay at the Academy as a home base in-between excavations; it's also where they sell planets. So the Academy refers to both the school piece and the actual scientist piece. It's all housed in one giant satellite station, which is also referred to as "the Academy."

7. Favorite character besides Razia/Lyssa
I'd have to say Sage. He is such a great foil to Razia because he doesn't take her crap. He's also one of the only people who really knows her and knows her past, which is always fun with someone who tries so hard to hide all of that. 

8. Five favorite lines from the book
5. Lyssa watched him jog out into the forest and tried to remind herself that she was already going to hell for much worse.

4. “You are messy, and kind of mean,” Sage shrugged. 

3. “You know, as a general rule, I don’t really beat up on the lesser pirates,” he began, walking up to her. “And I really don’t feel right hitting a girl.”

(followed by...)

2. “Wonderful,” Razia snapped, trying to keep her face emotionless, knowing exactly what was coming next. “So what are we doing here?”
 
1. "Shit." (this is actually my favorite line in multiple places).

9. Why should people read this book?
Because they love me? No, just kidding (except for you, Mom). People should read this book because besides all the space-ness, it's actually a pretty relatable story. Person has dream, life gets in the way, person adjusts. It's a story about relationships - family relationships, work relationships, and who we trust. It's also - at its heart - a story about someone recognizing their own self worth, which I think is a dance we can all groove to. 

10. Anything you want to add?
Just that I'm so amazed at how supportive everyone's been thus far, and my appreciation knows no bounds. And also that I now need to actually work on this book instead of making inane blog posts.... :X